Rought cut 3

Things we have changed:

• Many little tweaks to different things to improve the video.
• cut down the amount of shots in the woods location as feedback suggested this was boring.
• The scene in the underpass is considerably different with a quicker pace and more shots.
• Many many different shots in the new cafe location. I have used fast paced editing to make this more entertaining. 
• new train scene editing and footage, the chair was also in this bit of editing for our ending. However feedback suggested we should not carry this ending forward as it is not as creative as the other parts of the video.

We also created with special effects a new chair scene with alternating chairs, this believe works effectively as it goes with the beat and looks very unique.

As well as adding a new scene with the chairs we also used the graffiti wall to a good effect and edited in 3 of me onto the wall. When shown to a range of people in my target audience they liked it a lot as they thought it was a really good effect.

Numerous new shots in the new location of the cafe scene. This emphasises the characters insomnia by the fast paced editing and the numerous amount of sugars he puts in his tea.